Monday, June 27, 2016

My Writing: The Adventures of Emily Hattinkson: The Terrible Tumble

Greetings, Friends!

This week is an odd week. It is the fifth (at least I'm counting it as the fifth) week in June. My blog schedule is for four weeks only, so this week is extra. So, I'm going to share a story I've written with you.

Once upon a time, there was a girl who rode the city bus every day to school. She was an ordinary girl, but even extraordinary things happen to ordinary people sometimes. The first time she rode the bus, there were many new faces. All were adults going off to work, and she was terrified she would miss her stop, get lost, and be stuck on the bus forever. Maybe she would be on the bus so long, she would become a ghost, and wander that same bus for all of eternity. However, this was not the case, as she asked a benevolent young woman when to get off, and successfully made it to school.

This was the first of her many adventures aboard the city bus, and goodness, how many she would have. On this particular day, she was studying the “usuals;” what she called the people who were on the bus mostly every day. There was the grandma-ish lady with graying hair (her nametag said Nancy), and she worked at a hospital, and the older lady with curly blond hair; Charles the Accountant, the “Jodi Picoult” lady, named because she always read Jodi Picoult books, the lady with the bright pink Kindle and shoes that clopped, the man who read, the lady as old as the hills (she really did look like it), the young man with the yellow winter coat, the man only as tall as she was, and the lady that walked fast. Every day, people were bleary-eyed and tired, dozing off in their suits and fine clothing. Conversations rarely started, but when they did, she found them irritating, for they caused too much noise at too early an hour. Today, she was sitting at the very front of the bus, in one of the sets of three seats that faced each other, and, with such an awful lot of things to carry, what with schoolwork and an instrument, it was a bit of an ordeal.

Her bus whizzed along the highway quite confidently, being a commuter bus, and having the privilege to use the shoulder. On this route, few turns existed, but, the turns that did exist were harrowing. She was ever afraid she would fall, and, this day, she actually did. She fell with her knees over her instrument, which had also fallen, and the floor scraped her hands, although barely. She got up quickly, righted her instrument, and struggled not to be embarrassed. Nancy, the hospital lady asked if she was all right, and then put her foot in front of the girl's instrument so the girl could focus on keeping her balance. When she left the bus, she was glad she had time to regain her dignity.

This is the first of the many adventures of Emily Hattinkson.

Thank you for reading my story, Friends! On Friday, Dragomir will be doing another guest post!

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Spruce Nogard

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