Today, describe your pet.
First, use the list of banned words to describe your pet. If you don't have a pet, describe a picture of an animal, or any of the pictures below!
Here is the list: https://wikis.engrade.com/beginningiew/bannedwords
- Happy
- Sad
- Interesting
- Very
- Mad
- See/look
- Got
- Said
- Went
- Come
- Bad
- Ugly
- Big
- Small
- Thought
- Make
- Really
These words are banned because they are not specific enough. For example, someone could imagine something "big" as being the size of a table, while someone else could imagine something "big" as being the size of a house.
Here is my description of my dog:
Banned Words Version: I have a very interesting dog. She is small, white, and really happy. She loves people and gets mad sometimes.
No Banned Words Version: I have an incredible dog. She is ten pounds, and has very long legs. She also is white with a streak of apricot down her back. She is extremely cheerful most of the time, and gets overly excited when we have people over. Sometimes, she pouts when she is annoyed with us.
See the difference?
Post your descriptions in the comments below!
Spruce Nogard
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